Monday, June 25, 2007

Jeevan

Jab hawayein use puri tarah loot chuki thin
tab meine use poocha thaa kya
tumehe in hawaon se shikayaat nahi hoti
Mene dekha thaa jab ek ek kar phool gir rahe the
patte sab jhar rahe the
tab tum chup the
jab need ke panchi tumhe chod kar jaa rahe the
tum tab bhi chup the
usne dhire se kaha aisa nahi ki
mujhe girte phoolon ko rok lene ka man nahi karta
ya ki panchiyon ke jaane se mujhe dard nahi hota
par mein panchiyon ki aankhon mein
apne liye prem dekh rah jaata hoon chup
ki mere rone ke swar mein kahin door se aati
panchiyon kee madhur avvaz dab naa jaye
aur is tarah mein yaaden shaejkar rakhtaa hoon
hansne gaane gunguna ne ki !
mere liye patjhar jeevan ka ant nahi
agaami basant ki tayiaari hai !!


Alok Jain

3 comments:

  1. Nice Poem sir..
    But reading and understanding it would have become much easier, had you formatted it a bit with apostrophies and inverted commas and commans... but no doubt the poem is excellent.. keep it up..

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  2. alok kumar jain bahut badhiya poems par aur bhi acchha hoag tu inko hindi mein likhe unicode mein

    www.kaulonline.com pe u can do it

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  3. Nice start dear..

    Keep the spirits high..

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